Friday, 1 October 2021

Stranded

 


The Stranded

I was fishing and a storm hit my boat in the middle of the night and it happened again, again until the whole ship split apart. I quietly hopped in a dinghy and used my strength, and energy and made it to the Island. I lay there for a second then I got up and grabbed my snacks and kits out of my sailboat and the food that would last me 2 days.


The first day I used my skills to build a hut out of little sticks and bush and used the rest of that stuff to make a fire and I was standing there to keep warm. I felt the rain come down so I grabbed a bucket on the ground to get rainwater that would last me 2 days. I felt hungry. I went hunting. I found traps so I set them up then I waited. I got a deer. I cooked this deer on the fire. Yum, this meat is good I need to build an SOS signal that said Help me I’m stuck on an Island I went back to sleep in the hut slowly closing my eyes.


Day two 

I wake up and drink some water. I heard a noise walking past me and I turned around and saw nothing. I walk up and look at the footsteps. I kept walking that way until the footsteps stopped and looked up and saw a hungry animal running at me. I started running for my life and I got away. I saw a friendly animal that was sleeping. I kill it for lunch. My appetite changed so I gave the meat to the hungry animal I still felt so I looked up and saw coconuts. I climbed up and I got the coconut yum.


Day 3 

I ran out of food and water so I made a bow and I sharpened my arrows and I had to find a big animal to fill me up I hid in a bush to wait, it was a bear so I stand up start shooting the bear with my arrows but I didn’t stand a chance the animal that  I feed he ran at the bear and started kill now I'm the animal became best friends I call him best. On my way back I found the waterways it was close so I got some water I went back to camp with my friend and made a knife to cut the meat up and got the fur from that bear I made that a blanket it was warm as then I cook up the meat with a piece of rock over the fire. I wait and wait, wait it is ready so I bite into it yum delicious.

 

 Day 4 Fun, Fun 

I put my pants on and I jump in swimming underwater and found bones of the body and I was frightened so I swimming quickly to the surfaced and look very closely and saw a monster and his eyes were look at me and I quickly swimming to jump in the water and knocked out the monster  I throw him in the water, he swimming back in the ocean sea. After we went swimming we went fishing with bare hands. The first fish didn’t go well but the next one worked so I got another fish and walked back to camp to cook up after I ate it like it was so good it was delicious, slowly closing my eyes and dreaming of being saved from the Island.


Day 5 the day I got rescued


I wake up and eat some of my last night dinner and got some water out of the river and repair my SOS and I saw a big wave coming this way  I start running the other way and the monster came out of nowhere and wanted to kill me in a middle of a Tsunami I was thinking for a second of going into the wave and getting away from the monster or knockout the monster.  I knock out the monster then keep running in till my camp was destroyed and SOS was destroyed.

I saw a boat coming this way. I called out to them that they had guns and started to shoot or run in the bush. Then the plane let out a BOMB. I ran in the water but I  was too late and my body went everywhere I couldn’t even speak.

The end

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